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Here’s a poem I wrote in 2010.
I’ve just spent an hour rewriting it.
First I’ll show you the poem as I found it,
then I’ll show you how I have rewritten it so far.

December 14, 2010

My watch is a snake
winding around my wrist.
Still. Frozen. Waiting…it thinks I don’t know
it might strike
at any

April 16, 2014

A snake
winds around
my wrist.

It watches me.
It might strike
any second.


What metaphor struck you today?  Look out!

from morgueFile.com

from morgueFile.com



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