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THE DEAL IS SEALED ~ rough draft!
by April Halprin Wayland

Uncle Davie leans down.
Eli licks up.
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MAN MEETS DOG ~ rough draft!
by April Halprin Wayland

Uncle Davie leans down.
Eli licks up.

The deal
is sealed.

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MAN MEETS DOG ~ rough draft!
by April Halprin Wayland

Knock on door.
Dog walks in.
Uncle Davie leans down.
Eli licks up.
The deal
is sealed.

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I wrote the longest one first, then tried to condense it.  Which do you prefer?
Bruce says, “First [he means the longest] is best.”

90-year-old Uncle Davie meets Eli: love at first sight.

 

 

 

 


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